Your Fundraising Annual Appeal Letters Need A Villian

Anger is one of the best emotions that you canhundreds likely perished. For days, we saw the
arouse in a donor. Anger is a healthy emotion,images on our television screens of stranded citizens
particularly when your fundraising letter offers donorsdying in New Orleans while help tarried.
a way to assuage their anger. "Individuals are moreIn your fundraising letter to raise funds for these
prone to respond to a genuine feeling of anger thanhurricane victims, you could name President Bush as
to any other emotion," says Roland Kiniholm in hisyour villain. You could blame the plight of the
book, Maximum Gifts by Return Mail.displaced people on Federal Emergency Management
To make your donors angry, you need a villain. VillainsAgency director Michael Brown, who many are saying
are good. They help you focus your donors' attentionis responsible for the delays that caused so many
on one problem that needs fixing. That villain can be adeaths. Or you could blame the mayor of New
person or a problem.Orleans. But these attacks would sound unkind. And
My advice is that you never name a particular personpainting any of these men as the villain right now
as your villain, since doing so is not very charitable,would be premature.
excuse the pun. Plus, you might get sued forInstead, a successful appeal letter would paint the
defamation of character or slander. Instead, youhurricane as the villain. Or point the finger at the
should attack the catastrophe that the villain hasflooding as the villain.
created, or simply make the catastrophe the villain.Your fundraising campaign can have a villain and still
- Mothers Against Drunk Driving has a villain: drunkbe positive. The Red Cross, for example, is running a
driving (not drunken drivers)fundraising campaign right now with this theme: Hope
- The Coalition Against Gun Violence has a villain: gunis Stronger than a Hurricane. There's only one thing
violence (not gun owners)wrong with that theme. I didn't think of it.
- Oxfam has a villain: poverty (not the wealthy)If you want to stir up one of the strongest human
- Habitat for Humanity has a villain: unaffordableemotions to your advantage, chose a villain that your
housing (not landlords)donors can get angry at. Then show how your
Hurricane Katrina hit the Gulf Coast of the Unitednon-profit organization can alleviate that anger by
States last week. The response by the US federaleliminating (or, more realistically, weakening) that
government to the plight of tens of thousands ofvillain.
refugees stranded in New Orleans was so slow that