The Top Ten Mistakes That Kill Nonprofit Direct Mail Fundraising Letters

Raising money through the mail is an integral part ofprepare it well or are you rushed for time? If your
any successful fundraising program. But it'smailing has a specific "reply by" date, have you
complicated. There are lots of mistakes that can beallowed the recipient enough time to respond?
made which can undermine the success of the5. Asking for the wrong amount. Are you asking your
appeal. Here are the top ten most common mistakesdonors for the right amount? Base your ask string on
made in nonprofit direct mail fundraising letters.the donor's last gift amount so you aren't asking for
1. Failure to ask for a gift. Don't assume that yourtoo much or too little. Are you tying the ask amount
donors will know what you want them to do. Askto something meaningful in your organization? "Your
for a gift. And make sure to include a reply envelopegift of $1.74 will provide a hot meal to a homeless
to make it easy for your donors to send their gift toperson." Uneven amounts are more believable.
you.6. Ignoring automation benefits. In order to take
2. Using a dirty list. Keeping your list clean is one ofadvantage of the best postage rates, your return
the most important things you can do to ensure theenvelope must have the appropriate postal markings.
success of your appeal. Run your entire list throughThe size, shape, and color of your envelope must be
an NCOA (National Change of Address) updateconsidered for USPS regulations. Planning your mailing
annually (this is required by the USPS for non-profitwith a knowledgeable mailer can save you money on
rates and every six months on first class pre-sort).postage.
Always correct addresses of donors who have7. "Support Our Annual Fund." Donors don't want to
moved. Make sure to exclude deceased donors fromsupport your annual fund. They want to make a
your list and anyone else who doesn't need todifference in the lives of the people you serve. Tell a
receive your appeal.story of someone you have helped. Help the donor
3. "Dear Friend." Failing to personalize your letter tosee how his/her donation will make an impact.
each donor is detrimental to your appeal and can8. Poor quality letter. An experienced printing shop
send the wrong message. If someone has beencan help you get the best quality appeal in the mail.
donating to your organization for several years, youYou don't want to send out something that looks like
are insulting them by not using their name. It coulda copy of a bad copy.
also send the message that you are looking for an9. Paying too much for postage. Are you taking
easy way out in the letter preparation process. Usingadvantage of pre-sorted nonprofit postage rates?
a window envelope with the recipient's name andDid you know that you can use a stamp and still get
address showing through can reduce the laborlower rates?
involved in preparing the mailing and keep costs10. Failure to measure. You should set goals for each
down.appeal and measure its success. Are you measuring
4. Bad timing. Timing is everything in direct mail. Areyour success rates? Do you know what your
you mailing at the best times of the year? Are youresponse rate was on your last appeal? What was
coordinating your mailings with your other activities toyour average gift size? Did you have any major
maximize your media exposure? Have you planneddonors who self-identified themselves? What did it
your mailing so that you have plenty of time tocost you to raise a dollar?