Fundraising Letter Reply Devices: Are You Making These Mistakes?

id="body">· Include your organization name and
Fundraising letter reply devices--also known as replyaddress, just in case the reply device and reply
coupons, donation coupons, reply slips, responseenvelope get separated.
forms and gift forms--are the instruments that· If you are requesting gifts by check, tell
conclude your request for funds. If your reply devicethe donor who to make the check payable to.
doesn't work, your appeal letter doesn't work--andMistakes to Avoid
you don't get the gift.· Introducing new ideas or taking a new
Here are some tips for getting your reply devicesdirection
right.· Making the donor do too much
General Guidelines· Leaving insufficient room for donors
· Assume the reply device is the only piece(particularly elderly donors) to complete the form
in the package your donor will read. This forces you· Using the same reply device for every
to make a strong case for giving.appeal. Because they are printed several at a time on
· Ask donors to do as little as possible ina sheet of paper, reply devices are inexpensive to
returning a gift to you in the mail--make the processproduce. So design one for each appeal so that each
as quick and easy as possible.reply device supports the case for support and
· Involve the donor in some way (placing aappeal for funds in each appeal package
check mark in a box, answering a survey question or· Forgetting to include the donor's unique
two) that moves them closer to making the gift.identification number
· Restate why you are asking for funds· Printing the letter and reply device on the
now--keep selling the idea of making a contribution.same sheet of paper. Testing over the years has
· Reiterate the benefits the donor receivesdemonstrated that a separate letter, reply device
by making a donation (membership in yourand reply envelope generate better responses and
organization, for example, or a free book that youmore gifts than reply devices that must be torn off
will mail upon receiving the gift).the bottom of a letter.
· Contain an "acceptance statement" written· Designing your reply device so that donors
in the voice of the donor (Example: Yes! I'll help in theare confused and unsure of what to do to make a
fight to end clear cutting in Puget Sound. Here is mydonation.
gift. Send me your free newsletter."· Including information on the reply device
· Leave lots of room for donors to write.that donors want to keep but that must be returned
· If the reply device is designed to solicitwith a donation. Print any information that donors will
large gifts, don't call it a reply device. Give it a namelikely want to retain on a perforated portion of the
that communicates importance and value, such asreply device that donors tear off and keep.
"Memorandum of Acceptance."© 2006 Sharpe Copy Inc.